Where do I send my complaint?

Hawk perched majestically
Another day in paradise
Ducklings wading playfully
Hawk perched majestically
soars into duck pond fiercely
Devours duckling like a pie slice
Another day in paradise

(I tried the prompt-an attempted triolet, a great challenge for someone who is not used to poetry structure)

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